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2/26/2009

ah wednesday

my body is deteriorating
i ate meat.

ah

my heart is melting
i ain’t sweet.

ah

my tongue is bleeding
i cuss and spit

ah

my eyes are blinding
i see legs split

ah

my nose is bleeding
i read your tweet

ah

my soul is dying
today i cheat

ah

my body is deteriorating
i eat meat

3 comments:

lucas said...

bravo, my friend. i am fond of reading this kind of poetry. straight-forward, simple and contemporary with a twist of humor :)

love the part where there are legs splitting! haha!

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REALLY???!!! is she back for good or just a guest star? hmmm...

deejay said...

calling peta...!

seriously, you ought to send em a copy of your poem. :D

bulitas said...

@lucas: thanks.
who's back for good? oh, lana lang?
mawawala din ata siya =)

@deejay: whoa. peta miht be too big for this short piece. LOL thanks for visiting! apir!

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