my body is deteriorating
i ate meat.
ah
my heart is melting
i ain’t sweet.
ah
my tongue is bleeding
i cuss and spit
ah
my eyes are blinding
i see legs split
ah
my nose is bleeding
i read your tweet
ah
my soul is dying
today i cheat
ah
my body is deteriorating
i eat meat
bravo, my friend. i am fond of reading this kind of poetry. straight-forward, simple and contemporary with a twist of humor :)
ReplyDeletelove the part where there are legs splitting! haha!
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REALLY???!!! is she back for good or just a guest star? hmmm...
calling peta...!
ReplyDeleteseriously, you ought to send em a copy of your poem. :D
@lucas: thanks.
ReplyDeletewho's back for good? oh, lana lang?
mawawala din ata siya =)
@deejay: whoa. peta miht be too big for this short piece. LOL thanks for visiting! apir!